Using Adjectives

This week, our class have been working on improving our writing vocabulary using adjectives to give our writing more action. We have been given a few photos of the Rugby World Cup first game, All Blacks vs Tonga to write about. We just have to write one effective paragraph about three of the photos. Here are the paragraphs I have done.

The crowd cheered and applauded with excitement when Richard Kahui scored an impressive try. The raucous voices of the audience called out “Go The All Blacks”, were what spectators would shout out. The amount of people that were at the event held at the Eden Park stadium were over ten thousand.

With his muscular arms, Israel Dagg repelled his approaching opponent determined to add to the score board. It was a very tense moment but with a superb fend, Dagg came out with a spectacular try.

With their strength and commitment, the All Blacks said the Haka with pride. It was such an amazing performance by them showing their facial expression. They looked very tensed seeing their actions.